Sunday, June 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Closely Guarded


(My model for Chief Westcott)

I featured a bit last Sunday as well as the sip yesterday and here's a little more.

Nicolay continued to shed tears. His younger brother was lost during childbirth as was his mother, Oksana. His aunts and uncles, even his grandmother disowned him because of his sexual orientation. 
All he had was Ivan.
“I know someone killed him because he wanted democracy, and most likely, they didn’t like that he was an open minded person with new ideas.”

“He was good man, Nic; all were jealous of his success and all he did to bridge the gap between Russia and the rest of the world.”



12 comments:

Xakara said...

Poor Nicolay! Sigh. I'll be there for him.

Thanks for the dose of Anderson Cooper. Mmm...

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Cassandre Dayne said...

Oh girl - I really love this one today. Shows such angst

Havan said...

Makes me want to wrap him up and protect him . . . and the eye candy is wrappable also! Thanks for this! :D

Rawiya said...

TY for visiting Xakara, Cass, and Havan. I'm loving this story so far!

lexcade said...

Sounds awesome! I'd love to give Nicolay a big ol' hug right about now.

Also, Anderson Cooper = YUM

Bree said...

Great six!! Brings out all kinds of emotions.

Michael said...

TY so much. This story is very emotional in the beginning! ;)

Sam Crescent said...

this weeks is very emotional but I love your writing thanks for sharing another great six

Rawiya said...

TY Sam. Much appreciated!

Kerry Freeman said...

I love stories with a political plot/subplot. Great six!

Keta Diablo said...

Hi Michael,

Very well done, but made me a little sad. I feel bad for him. Guess that's a good thing in so short of a span, right?

Also love the blog. Well done, Keta
Cradle of Dreams 6SS

Alix said...

Great six. WOW