Sunday, June 19, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Closely Guarded





Greetings people!

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

Today. i'm doing six from my new WIP, Closely Guarded. I previewed it in the sip and now here are a few sentences.


Within moments of his last words, a gunshot rang out from the balcony, catching Alexander in the center of his head.  He went down with a thud and immediately, people in the first two rows ran to him screaming in their native tongues.


 His right hand man, Demetriv, held him in his arms, sobbing uncontrollably.  “No, Alexander, no, oh my God!”

 The blood trickled from his forehead on down to the collar of his shirt.
Others continued to cry out in Russian, looking on as security and medics ran in to check out the scene. 


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20 comments:

Bree said...

Intense scene!

An Open Book said...

Very intense- wow- can't wait to see more
Dawne P

Rawiya said...

TY both!

This story is very different than anything Ive done.

Cassandre Dayne said...

Love it very much girl!

Rawiya said...

TY hun. I really love the story so far

Laura said...

Very intense six sentence!

Shay MacLean said...

Wow! Really grabs you. Love it.

Rawiya said...

TY both. The story is shaping well. Its an intense story

Kellie Kamryn said...

It really makes the reader want to know more - I know I do. Love the 6!

Rawiya said...

TY so much. :)

Sam Crescent said...

A gripping scene :-)

Michael said...

TY Sam!

:)

Kally said...

As Laura said, that was intense! Good job!

Rawiya said...

TY Kally!

gayleramage said...

Oh, flipping heck. Intense is an understatement! Great snippet, though!

Michele Barrow-Belisle said...

That was incredibly intense!

xakara said...

Wow, what a wonderful intensity! I don't know if I can wait until week, I might have to pepper you with questions before then. *smile*

~Xakara
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Ranae Rose said...

Yikes! Intense scene! Not sure whether to feel sad whether he's been shot or not, as I don't know whether he's a good guy or a bad guy. Ok, well, I can't really help from feeling sad...

Rawiya said...

TY everyone for visiting. I really appreciate it!

Cassandra Carr said...

Uh-oh. That doesn't sound good for Alexander...