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Today. i'm doing six from my new WIP, Closely Guarded. I previewed it in the sip and now here are a few sentences.
Within moments of his last words, a gunshot rang out from the balcony, catching Alexander in the center of his head. He went down with a thud and immediately, people in the first two rows ran to him screaming in their native tongues.
His right hand man, Demetriv, held him in his arms, sobbing uncontrollably. “No, Alexander, no, oh my God!”
The blood trickled from his forehead on down to the collar of his shirt.
Others continued to cry out in Russian, looking on as security and medics ran in to check out the scene.
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20 comments:
Intense scene!
Very intense- wow- can't wait to see more
Dawne P
TY both!
This story is very different than anything Ive done.
Love it very much girl!
TY hun. I really love the story so far
Very intense six sentence!
Wow! Really grabs you. Love it.
TY both. The story is shaping well. Its an intense story
It really makes the reader want to know more - I know I do. Love the 6!
TY so much. :)
A gripping scene :-)
TY Sam!
:)
As Laura said, that was intense! Good job!
TY Kally!
Oh, flipping heck. Intense is an understatement! Great snippet, though!
That was incredibly intense!
Wow, what a wonderful intensity! I don't know if I can wait until week, I might have to pepper you with questions before then. *smile*
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6ss
Yikes! Intense scene! Not sure whether to feel sad whether he's been shot or not, as I don't know whether he's a good guy or a bad guy. Ok, well, I can't really help from feeling sad...
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Uh-oh. That doesn't sound good for Alexander...
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