Sunday, August 7, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Mi Familia



Happy Sunday!

My Six Sentence Sunday is from my free read Mi Familia. This is a very emotional scene and a turning point in the story.

Vince sighed, still staring at Diante’s swollen face. 

He felt sorry for him but he was glad he’d finally admitted he was gay; Vince felt compelled to admit his curiosities as well but decided to focus on his good friend who needed his support.  

“Listen man…I meant what I said, we’re your buds and we’re here for you. 

I dunno what took you so long to tell us.”

“I didn’t know how to tell you because I thought you two would hate me.”

“Why would we do that, huh, thick in thin, all for one, one for all, you know?”

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25 comments:

Rawiya said...

I'd like to thank everyone in advance for visiting. Hope you enjoyed it!

Alix said...

A great six of good friends and support. Thank you.

2bmechick said...

Awws friends are everything!!!!

Lisa Worrall said...

Awww - lovely xx

vampiremorbius said...

Really good six. Strong emotion

Laura said...

Very nice. A wonderful moment full of foreshawoding...

Dee said...

A very good six with lots of emotion.

Diane Adams

Ray Sostre said...

That was really good work there. Good Six!

gayleramage said...

You can tell who your true friends are at moments like these. Great snippet.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

I love the fact he has people to lean on.

KaceyHammell said...

Love the togetherness & support! Powerful.
Wonderful wonderful 6

Paula Martin said...

Great six, so glad his friends are supportive

Gemma Parkes said...

I'm glad he was able to open up. Good six!

xakara said...

A lovely show of support. Love the bit of curiosity in there.

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Liz said...

nice work, very emotionally satisfying.
Liz

Gem Sivad said...

That's good solid writing...and I like the story already. :)

Sam Crescent said...

Excellent six and looking forward to more

Vivien Dean said...

Lots of real emotion here. Thanks for sharing!

Bree said...

Very good handling of a difficult moment. Great six!! Isn't that a pic of Jason Momoa in the center? He's the new Conan the Barbarian. Yum!

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Awww, friends until the end! Great six!

Rawiya said...

@Bree that is indeed Jason Momoa. On the left is Greg Plitt and on the right, David Taylor

Marie Dees said...

Interesting six. Wonder what's coming up next for these three.

Sondra said...

That one line, "Vince felt compelled to admit his curiosities" has me intrigued. How sad, that Diante thought his friends would hate him. And bittersweet when he learns they don't. This is a very touching scene.

Layla Hunter said...

Loved the six! Very emotional indeed!

Nichelle Gregory said...

That's what friend are for..great six! :)