Happy Sunday!
My Six Sentence Sunday is from my free read Mi Familia. This is a very emotional scene and a turning point in the story.
Vince sighed, still staring at Diante’s swollen face.
He felt sorry for him but he was glad he’d finally admitted he was gay; Vince felt compelled to admit his curiosities as well but decided to focus on his good friend who needed his support.
“Listen man…I meant what I said, we’re your buds and we’re here for you.
I dunno what took you so long to tell us.”
“I didn’t know how to tell you because I thought you two would hate me.”
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A great six of good friends and support. Thank you.
Awws friends are everything!!!!
Awww - lovely xx
Really good six. Strong emotion
Very nice. A wonderful moment full of foreshawoding...
A very good six with lots of emotion.
Diane Adams
That was really good work there. Good Six!
You can tell who your true friends are at moments like these. Great snippet.
I love the fact he has people to lean on.
Love the togetherness & support! Powerful.
Wonderful wonderful 6
Great six, so glad his friends are supportive
I'm glad he was able to open up. Good six!
A lovely show of support. Love the bit of curiosity in there.
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
nice work, very emotionally satisfying.
Liz
That's good solid writing...and I like the story already. :)
Excellent six and looking forward to more
Lots of real emotion here. Thanks for sharing!
Very good handling of a difficult moment. Great six!! Isn't that a pic of Jason Momoa in the center? He's the new Conan the Barbarian. Yum!
Awww, friends until the end! Great six!
@Bree that is indeed Jason Momoa. On the left is Greg Plitt and on the right, David Taylor
Interesting six. Wonder what's coming up next for these three.
That one line, "Vince felt compelled to admit his curiosities" has me intrigued. How sad, that Diante thought his friends would hate him. And bittersweet when he learns they don't. This is a very touching scene.
Loved the six! Very emotional indeed!
That's what friend are for..great six! :)
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