Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - The Professor: Out of Bounds



Good morning! Here is a little more of my recently submitted story, The Professor.

“I’m a gay man, Parker; I’m just scared I want this, professor and I want you.”

Jesus FUCK!   

Parker’s breaths labored and he closed his eyes tightly while placing a hand on top of Jelani’s.

 “This is too much of a risk. I’m your professor, I’m a lot older than you, you have basketball, your newfound appreciation for learning…”

“But I don’t have you,” Jelani cut in. 

24 comments:

Alix said...

Sensational six, best of luck with the submission, I love how you alays manage to weave in so much emotion in so few words.

Sonya Clark said...

Good luck with your submission! From this snippet it sounds like a hot one.

J.C. Martin said...

Uh oh, looks like this is developing into a rather unprofessional student-teacher relationship! Great six, I'm a new follower!

Emily Cale said...

Best of luck with your submission. Sounds like there is a lot of sexy tension in this story.

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Good luck with your submission. Great sensual six! Loved it!

Lisa Worrall said...

Love it!

vampiremorbius said...

Brilliant

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Good luck hon, if your six is any indication of your work you have a keeper here!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Great awareness. Best of luck with the submission!

Cara Bristol said...

I'm guessing the professor caves! Great tension. Enjoyed your six.

Cate Masters said...

Now that's a compelling argument! :)

Angel Martinez said...

Love this - of course, I know what happens next (mwahaha!) Even if it doesn't make it in the Amber process (and that is often pretty competitive, so it can be a more a matter of how many of these and those they already have) I think this needs to get subbed around, Shar!

SJ said...

Oooh...awesome and intense!

I love the angst here!

Hugs,
SammyJo

Vivien Dean said...

Good luck with the submission! This looks hot enough to scorch.

Kharisma Rhayne said...

Good luck with he sub....
this sounds like it's going to be a hot one. Great six

lexcade said...

Good luck!!! You've built great tension between the two!

gemma parkes said...

Sounds interesting Michael, look forward to reading more!

Ray Sostre said...

Loving the risky situation you placed there. Where does it escelate to I wonder? Awesome Six!

Summer said...

Very nice - you can feel the tension!!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Great conflict!!

Christa Paige said...

Great dialog love the way the scene ends with such a powerful line.

Muffy said...

I loved it!! Gret luck with the submission. If this is any measure of what's to....come....you nailed it:) xo

Pablo Michaels said...

Great six. Just the response from the professor leads to a better comment.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Good luck with the submission xxx "but I don't have you" love that line!