Good morning! Here is a little more of my recently submitted story, The Professor.
“I’m a gay man, Parker; I’m just scared I want this, professor and I want you.”
Jesus FUCK!
Parker’s breaths labored and he closed his eyes tightly while placing a hand on top of Jelani’s.
“This is too much of a risk. I’m your professor, I’m a lot older than you, you have basketball, your newfound appreciation for learning…”
“But I don’t have you,” Jelani cut in.
24 comments:
Sensational six, best of luck with the submission, I love how you alays manage to weave in so much emotion in so few words.
Good luck with your submission! From this snippet it sounds like a hot one.
Uh oh, looks like this is developing into a rather unprofessional student-teacher relationship! Great six, I'm a new follower!
Best of luck with your submission. Sounds like there is a lot of sexy tension in this story.
Good luck with your submission. Great sensual six! Loved it!
Love it!
Brilliant
Good luck hon, if your six is any indication of your work you have a keeper here!
Great awareness. Best of luck with the submission!
I'm guessing the professor caves! Great tension. Enjoyed your six.
Now that's a compelling argument! :)
Love this - of course, I know what happens next (mwahaha!) Even if it doesn't make it in the Amber process (and that is often pretty competitive, so it can be a more a matter of how many of these and those they already have) I think this needs to get subbed around, Shar!
Oooh...awesome and intense!
I love the angst here!
Hugs,
SammyJo
Good luck with the submission! This looks hot enough to scorch.
Good luck with he sub....
this sounds like it's going to be a hot one. Great six
Good luck!!! You've built great tension between the two!
Sounds interesting Michael, look forward to reading more!
Loving the risky situation you placed there. Where does it escelate to I wonder? Awesome Six!
Very nice - you can feel the tension!!
Great conflict!!
Great dialog love the way the scene ends with such a powerful line.
I loved it!! Gret luck with the submission. If this is any measure of what's to....come....you nailed it:) xo
Great six. Just the response from the professor leads to a better comment.
Good luck with the submission xxx "but I don't have you" love that line!
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