Sunday, July 31, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Taming Wild Horses



Good morning.

Here is six sentences from one of my current WIP's I haven't shared yet.

My gay cowboy erotica romance, Taming Wild Horses which is full of snark. Michael has taken on BL's approach for this story.

Warning: Foul Language

“Yep,” Dolby sighed, licking the small bit of juice of his lips. I’m a lucky sonofabitch; still living, breathing which is good, but, I can’t walk, can’t thrust my hips to fuck my lover, and I can’t take care of my ranch properly, the bastard shoulda just taken me!”


“Now that’s no way to talk, son…the Lord…”

“Spare me Miss Bible thumper, I don’t need it, okay? Just go get my man so he can suck me off, do somethin’ to get me out of this foul mood I’m in.” 

Nana exhaled, “Yes sir. You need Jesus,” she huffed, walking out, saying something else barely audible.

To read a little more click here.




15 comments:

vampiremorbius said...

Really well written

An Open Book said...

WOW....great scene- can't wait to see where it leads to
Dawne P

Ursula Whistler said...

Not what I expected. Good job.

Liz said...

holy crap....amazing. I want to read more.
cheers
Liz

Robin_Badillo said...

Hehehe! He needs somethin' all right! Loved it!:-)

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Now that's what I'm talking about. He may not be able to walk but, he still has needs. Cool - I like it.

Laura said...

Love it! A wonderful snippet that leaves hungry for more!

Laura

Alix said...

Love it! No wonder he's so grumpy though. Fantastic six. Thank you.

Lisa Worrall said...

Fantastic six - he sure blew the wind up her skirt!

Lex Valentine said...

He sure has a serious chip on his shoulder!

Marie Dees said...

Fun six! I want to see where this goes.

Sara York said...

Very nice

Rawiya said...

Thank you much everyone for the comments!

gayleramage said...

Oh, wonder what it was she said at the end. Great snippet, can feel his frustration. :-)

Nichelle Gregory said...

I'm not sure a BJ's gonna fix his attitude! ;)