Good morning.
Here is six sentences from one of my current WIP's I haven't shared yet.
My gay cowboy erotica romance, Taming Wild Horses which is full of snark. Michael has taken on BL's approach for this story.
Warning: Foul Language
“Yep,” Dolby sighed, licking the small bit of juice of his lips. I’m a lucky sonofabitch; still living, breathing which is good, but, I can’t walk, can’t thrust my hips to fuck my lover, and I can’t take care of my ranch properly, the bastard shoulda just taken me!”
“Now that’s no way to talk, son…the Lord…”
“Spare me Miss Bible thumper, I don’t need it, okay? Just go get my man so he can suck me off, do somethin’ to get me out of this foul mood I’m in.”
Nana exhaled, “Yes sir. You need Jesus,” she huffed, walking out, saying something else barely audible.
To read a little more click here.
14 comments:
Really well written
WOW....great scene- can't wait to see where it leads to
Dawne P
Not what I expected. Good job.
holy crap....amazing. I want to read more.
cheers
Liz
Hehehe! He needs somethin' all right! Loved it!:-)
Now that's what I'm talking about. He may not be able to walk but, he still has needs. Cool - I like it.
Love it! A wonderful snippet that leaves hungry for more!
Laura
Love it! No wonder he's so grumpy though. Fantastic six. Thank you.
Fantastic six - he sure blew the wind up her skirt!
He sure has a serious chip on his shoulder!
Fun six! I want to see where this goes.
Thank you much everyone for the comments!
Oh, wonder what it was she said at the end. Great snippet, can feel his frustration. :-)
I'm not sure a BJ's gonna fix his attitude! ;)
Post a Comment