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Review: Faelon
AJ
Kelton
Greetings
readers. I recently read the book Faelon by AJ Kelton and I was super excited
to do so. A book about a nephilim, a three thousand year old immortal who tries to
live in modern day. Just the premise of it excited me, especially since I love
stories about angels and demons. However, in my opinion, the story fell flat and
because of a few of glaring errors, I can’t rate it above a 2.5.
First
the positives. The author paints a beautiful picture of this angel, Faelon who’s
been abused for centuries. His black wings, he’s half human, half angel and
being chased by a demon called Cayman makes for an awesome story. Then there’s
the other man, Jax, who’s a security guard, a historian who comes to know
Faelon and once he gets over the initial shock of the black wings, seems to
fall in love with him. Again, makes for a great story right? Well yes but I
feel the author missed out on some great opportunities for a more enjoyable
piece.
The
negatives in my opinion were distractions for this book. The POV head hopping
which happened way too often in the book. When the first occurred I had to go
back and make sure I wasn’t seeing the wrong thing. Sort of took me out of the
story. Also, I felt the characters fell short of being brilliant. In my
opinion, Faelon and Jax weren’t complete. We’re beaten over the
head with the fact Faelon is a sex slave, loves it rough, and seems to need
this abuse to feel wanted. Since I’m not into extreme BDSM, some of the things
Faelon went through troubled me. It’s not the author’s fault at all that
it’s not my cuppa. However, my major problem was the character Jax and how the
seemingly mild mannered security guard became a dom, doing things to Faelon
that bordered on abuse. I got that Faelon was immortal and could take a lot of
it but I felt some of the actions by Jax were forced. From what the author showed, he just didn’t seem like
the kind of person to be doing these things. Perhaps easing us into his
transformation with a couple of light acts then a gradual change to experienced dom would’ve
worked better. Again, it’s only my opinion but once I got to the middle of the
book, I felt like it was torture just for the sake of shock value. I found
myself skimming through the sex scenes to get to the next part.
Lastly
the very confusing turn of events at the end. He unites with his former master
Delgorio because he’s terrified of the Cayman and asks for help. The tension
between Jax and Delgorio is definitely there and I wanted to know more about
their relationship. He seemed to leave as quick as he came which was disappointing.
There would’ve been another opportunity for the plot to go deeper but instead
the author didn’t explore that more.
I
really wanted to like this book. It had promise and an angel who begs to be
loved makes for a great novel but this story’s glaring errors and forced sex
made me wish for the ending. That being said, I would still like to read the
sequel if there is one. I want to know more about Faelon and how he gets away
from the Cayman while trying to survive in the modern world with a human lover.
Hopefully the author will do build on that more in the next story. If so, I'd gladly give it a look.
2.5
stars
Blurb: Who knew that loving a Nephilim could be so dangerous.
Faelon, a 3000-year-old nephilim, fleeing a demonic master, found safety with the church. He has repaid their kindness by translating various artifacts. Father Donovan has watched as Faelon became a recluse, fearing those who would harm him.
Jax, wanting a change, moves to Salem, MA where he finds work as a churches security guard. Not believing that Faelon is a nephilim, he is forced to confront his own beliefs in the supernatural.
Can he learn to accept Faelon, and be the master he requires? Or lose the man he loves to the demons who would harm him.
Faelon, a 3000-year-old nephilim, fleeing a demonic master, found safety with the church. He has repaid their kindness by translating various artifacts. Father Donovan has watched as Faelon became a recluse, fearing those who would harm him.
Jax, wanting a change, moves to Salem, MA where he finds work as a churches security guard. Not believing that Faelon is a nephilim, he is forced to confront his own beliefs in the supernatural.
Can he learn to accept Faelon, and be the master he requires? Or lose the man he loves to the demons who would harm him.
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